Okay, Wedding Planner!Casey fic chapter one done.

Or is it? I want feedback on a few specifics (although, feedback at all is great!):

a.) Sheldon's voice. Am I... sort of on track or is he too zany? I love the boy, I do, but I don't know how well I write him.

b.) I made Derek a bit "smoother" in his flirting with Casey at the end than he probably ( Read more... )